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Summary

It wasn't bad actually. The voice acting was fairly good, but I think that the background noise was a bit lacking. Side note: the sound was reeeeeal quiet, make it a bit louder.
It was also pretty unclear what was going on most of the time, as there was no way of knowing the story, or background.
The animation itself was alright; not very 'animated' per se', but like you said, it was an animated comic.
Improve the sound a bit and make the frame larger and you'd have a good template to work from.

Hehe

I saw the comic of this before I saw this animation but I must say that you animated it very well. This is almost exactly how I imagined it happening in my head. Well done to you and to Andrew Dickman, the original creator.

Karma

I agree with most of the previous reviews, it was well animated, if a bit short, and had an interesting style. I thought the music suited it pretty well too.
The only problem I see is with the message. Where is the concept of karma present? It can't be with the eagle because he was hunting to eat, not acting out of malice. The weasel also didn't do anything particularly good to merit survival. The dragonfly also just appeared to be buzzing around randomly.

Also commercial planes don't usually fly that low. Sequel needs that pilot to be 'taken care of'.

Great animation, but lacks accuracy

Just like other people have said previously I find the story lacking in accuracy. The Spartan II project was performed on children no older than 6 years old. Certainly not old enough to have a wife or family. The Spartan III project was performed on similar subjects but was definitely not 'superior' to the Spartan II project. The Spartan II's were the only Spartan group ever to be given the iconic MJOLNIR battle armour. The Spartan III's were made to be mass produced and expendable soldiers capable of fulfilling otherwise impossible missions. Their armour was known as SPI armour which, while it did have active camouflaging, did not have energy shields or enhanced strength and movement.
This animaton seems to refer to the Spartan I project which was vastly different to the later projects. The Spartan I's WERE volunteers from current armed forces in the UNSC and WERE given 'genetically enhanced poison' and WERE also known as the ORION project but they were not given MJOLNIR or any other type of special battle armour and were also not deployed for active service. The ORION project was marked as a failure due to the high mortality rate of test subjects and mental instability experienced by the subjects.
Apart from these and a few other minor innacuracies the actual animation was outstanding!
The quality of the visuals was very high indeed, and the sound quality was also impressive. It's nice to see a serious Halo spoof instead of all those low-quality 'funny' ones. I look forward to seeing more of this series.
8/10 because it's very good but lacks accuracy to the Halo story.

Good luck with the next episodes.

Enzer0 responds:

I refer to the spartan to project but i dont talk about it!!! Argh how many times do i need to say this - We are orions spartans because were stuck in the ORION SECTOR!

Excellent

I like this, that painting is a very good depiction of the global warming issue. The animation was also fluid and very well done.
The only question I have is - Why is it 8 mb?

*shudder*

Although this was disgusting I gave it a good score. It is better than many animations in it's graphics and violence content. Good work, even though it's very graphic... *shudder*

Reverse Psychology

Usually when someone ask for something not to be blammed you know that it has little chance of surviving the portal. It's kinda reverse psychology. This was okay though, I don't know what you were worried about.
If you need hosting then there are loads of alternative file hosting websites that don't blam things.
The only problem was the lack of content in the animation... either that or I couldn't find the content.

Great

Good work,
I can't wait until the series is done.
No complaints from me.

If it ain't done, don't do it.

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